Edit Sample

A revised edit returns

Oct 9 •

Developmental Edit #10

Honing meaning and worldbuilding

Sep 25 •

Striving for style

Jul 31 •

Live Edit: Connecting Imagery and Character

Jun 19 •

Developmental Edit #9

A mundane opening makes for a DNF

May 29 •

Clarify Genre in Your Story

Developmental Edit #8

May 22 •

Fix Wordiness in a Story Opening

Apr 24 •

Developmental Edit #7

Setting in relation to character

Apr 3 •

From Draft to Copy Edit

One scene, four layers of edits

Mar 13 •

An artist and her run-in with bureaucracy

Feb 20 •

Developmental Edit #6

Science Fiction Character Building

Feb 13 •

Developmental Edit #5

A meander into setting

Jan 9 •

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